The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey "Falcon" Logue

not much detail in general about the world and how magic works there. deus ex machina) that the one person who could stop him was included the day he decided to enact his 'master plan'. His convoluted plan makes no sense when he could have easily just waltzed to the boss room and accomplished his goals within the first 5 chapters. The villain never seems to be a sincere threat. The whole mommy/daddy thing is super cringy.

The few jokes in there dialogue are weird and oddly oversexualized for a magical being speaking to a sentient gemstone. The relationship between the dungeon and his sprite feels so hamfisted and awkward.

Second, I find the actual story severely lacking in details and can't seem to decide whether to be satirical litrpg comedy or gritty fantasy epic. as an audiobook I'd hope for it to at least make it through a work day. First, even as a new release, a 25 dollar price tag for a book this short is already a mark against it. (especially since the second dungeon born book is already available on kindle) I decided to check it out and was quite dissapointed. I was excited to see what a book that took this long to release would bring. The slime dungeon, as I understand had begun it's writing process before dungeon born and is widely considered to be the more original story.

In looking around for similar novels I found the slime dungeon, which was being heavily used as a comparison online. Short, expensive, vague, and cringworthy.Īfter reading dungeon born book 1 I was hungry for some more litrpg novels of the sentient dungeon variety.

The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey &quot;Falcon&quot; Logue

The Slime Dungeon by Jeffrey "Falcon" Logue